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Lies, deceits,
The pain from it all
Draining
So draining

Back stabbing best friends
Been cheating on by your loved one

The fucking bastard with the skank
How approving

The cheated sitting on the side lines
Hurt, broken and alone
Feel the heat of a tear in the eye
Push it back.
They were below you and not worth a second thought.
“Never cry over someone who won’t cry over you” they say

The pain eating the cheated alive!
The blade is the way out
Blood streaming down their arm
The numbing taking the pain away
Cutting deeper and deeper with every strike

Drink from the bottle and forget it all
The burn all the way down the throat
Black outs
Forget everything

Take one last cut with the knife
Forever forget
Life flash before their eyes
Pain sorrow joy misery

In the end the fucking bastard and skank live happily ever after
The perfect ending……
©2006-2010 ~lovetoshine22
:iconlovetoshine22:

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This peice is bumpy and doenst stick to one topic but oh well..... just random..

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:iconreignofmyu:
Loveily.

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Yesterday I got lost on the road of life... now i'm just lost.
:iconlovetoshine22:
:D thanks! Lol. It honestly started with one thing. THen I just got into it!

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If you times that by a million, take it to the depths of eternity, you still wont even have a glimmer of what I'm talking about.

I dont need an icecream cone. They end up melting and makeing a bigger mess then you already have.
:iconreignofmyu:
That's always a good starting point.

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Yesterday I got lost on the road of life... now i'm just lost.
:iconunconsciousrhapsody:
i'm with them (scroll up)

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I didnt lack love what i lacked was understanding
:iconlovetoshine22:
Thanks alot!

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If you times that by a million, take it to the depths of eternity, you still wont even have a glimmer of what I'm talking about.

I dont need an icecream cone. They end up melting and makeing a bigger mess then you already have.
:iconmigoto-toraneko:
I don't know what I can say to this.

Technically, it's flawless; it is most definitely the best poem you have written thus far.

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A hypocrite is a person who-- but who isn't?
- Don Marquis
:iconlovetoshine22:
AWWW thanks!!!!!!!!! Ok considering i think of you as one of the best writers i no that is SUCH a complament!!!! THanks hun!!!!! Maybe there is hope for me yet in the writing busness..:)

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If you times that by a million, take it to the depths of eternity, you still wont even have a glimmer of what I'm talking about.

I dont need an icecream cone. They end up melting and makeing a bigger mess then you already have.
:iconmigoto-toraneko:
You're very welcome. You did a marvelous job!

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A hypocrite is a person who-- but who isn't?
- Don Marquis
:iconlovetoshine22:
:)

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If you times that by a million, take it to the depths of eternity, you still wont even have a glimmer of what I'm talking about.

I dont need an icecream cone. They end up melting and makeing a bigger mess then you already have.

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